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Thursday, July 30, 2015

Chapter 11: Analysis

It's been three weeks? I'm still doing this?! Of course I am; what, just 'cause it doesn't seem to have a practical application, I can't work my ass off?! ^_^

This one was difficult. Fun-difficult, though! I'm sure it's imperfect, but it's hard to analyze (heyo!) right now. We'll fix it at some point! Probably.

If you're new to Arbiter, start here. If you want the beginning of this episode, this is the link you want. If you're ready for the freshest crap, then you want this one or the one below.


Chapter 11: Analysis

Dahlia’s eyes widened, and her companions gasped. Now that their eyes had adjusted, they could watch the battle, and it was proving to be quite a spectacle. Something had shot out from under the monster’s bony crest when the enemy’s captain had evaded its charge. From the lack of movement, Dahlia was sure the impact had killed him.


The other apprentices were horrified by the sight, particularly Jaquan. Dahlia supposed most had never seen anyone die before; this was nothing compared to the time she watched Chomp kill Nikhil. Dahlia was more impressed by the slayer than she was sorry for the slain.


For the first time since it started, she was glad to be excluded from the battle. She was struggling to imagine what she could have done to survive if she’d been in the captain’s place. Nothing she considered would work if she didn’t know that something was hiding under that crest.


She bit her bottom lip. Breathing, hidden weapons, Chomp’s earth magic; battle was full of factors she’d never considered in her dances with the matron. The older hunters had always said Dahlia would come to understand why they weren’t letting her hunt, despite all the praise they heaped on her. With a tinge of reluctance, she was beginning to believe they were right.


“What was that?!” Jaquan sobbed. “What did it do to him?!”


“Jaquan, maybe you better turn around.” Jedrek was careful to keep his tone gentle. “It may be easier if you don’t watch.”


“No, no, NO!” Somehow the idea terrified Jaquan even more. He clung to Idris’s arm.


“I think his imagination would be worse than the reality,” Idris guessed. “He’d probably just think it would come for him because he wasn’t looking.”


Jaquan shivered and glanced over both shoulders in turn. Apparently, Idris only reminded him that something might be happening behind him. Dahlia chuckled. The cowardice was pitiable, but more than that, it was endearing.


“Ya needn’t worry, lad,” Dahlia assured. “It won’t get past the ‘unters. It’s gotta go through all of them - and me - ta get to you. It ain’t gonna happen!”


“How can you be so sure?” Jaquan asked. “How can you stop something that big?”


“Its size can be used against it.” Jaquan jumped at Trent’s voice, prompting another laugh from Dahlia. Trent was about the least scary thing she could imagine. “It would seem the armor will be more of an obstacle.”


“Both will cause it problems,” Lyn agreed. Somehow, she managed to approach without startling Jaquan, even with Moondancer in tow. “Armor and size cause heat. They’ll limit its speed and endurance.”


“Oi there, Trent, Lyn.” Dahlia greeted. “How is ya?”


“Well enough,” Trent said.


“Concerned,” Lyn admitted.


“Trent,” Jedrek scowled. “Where’s the elder?”


“Sleeping.”


“This didn’t wake her?” Jedrek seemed skeptical.


“It did.” Trent shrugged. “She ordered me to come here.”


“Why didn’t she come with you?” Jedrek demanded.


“Ask her yourself.”


Dahlia noticed Lyn glance at Trent; did she think he was hiding something? If so, she didn’t share the suspicion. “This is a strange beast, even for the woods. I’d guess it’s in the same category as Chomp and Stinger?”


“Aye,” Dahlia nodded. “Not the huntin’ or tamin’ kind, it’s the warrin’ kind.”


“Indeed,” Trent agreed.


There were gasps and several screams as the monster barreled past a crowd of skirmishers. Dahlia grit her teeth; three more shadows had leapt out from under the monster’s crest, and while two of them felled enemies, one had connected with a hunter.


A skittering motion near the captain’s corpse caught her eye. Her heart beat faster as she watched the bug-like silhouette racing back towards the much bigger beast. Those projectiles were alive?


“Fascinating!” Trent took a few steps forward and shielded his eyes. “It’s some kind of symbiote?”


“Huh?” Dahlia cocked an eyebrow.


“When two animals of different species cooperate, it’s called symbiosis,” Trent explained.


“We cooperate with the herd,” Lyn observed. “Does that make us symbiotes?”


“Yes,” Trent said.


Dahlia frowned. Could that information help the hunters? Should she try to tell them?


“Look!” Trent pointed at the nearest corpse. “Whatever it is, it’s growing!”


Dahlia squinted. The dark figure’s backside did seem to be swelling.


“Suckin’ ‘is blood?” Dahlia wondered.


“I think so!” Trent sounded delighted, and Dahlia had to jump to stop him from rushing towards the creature. He struggled to break her grip on his collar. “Let go!”


“Nuh-uh.” Dahlia didn’t waver. “You’re stayin’ here ‘til I’m sure nothin’ sucks your blood.”


Trent stopped struggling. “I suppose it would be prudent to study them after they’re dead.”


“Oh, no,” Lyn gasped. Dahlia followed her gaze and felt dread rising as she saw the host monster barreling towards Kirana. Had she seen the smaller beasts? Did she know that the real threat came after she avoided trampling?


Kirana began sidestepping well in advance, gauging her aggressor. Even when she was clearly out of its way, it didn’t try to correct its course. All that remained…


Kirana leapt as a shadow slammed into the ground where she’d been standing, and Dahlia’s group shared a sigh of relief. The creature made to run after its host, but Kirana had nocked an arrow as she jumped. It hit with enough force to pass clean through its body.


The host roared - or was it a moan? - at the death of its symbiote. Dahlia wasn’t sure how it knew; it hadn’t been facing that direction when it died. Regardless, there was a stutter in its stride as it circled away for the next pass.


“Are there only three?” Svara asked.


“Huh?”


“Kirana killed one, and the most I’ve seen at once is four.” Svara motioned at the three bloated figures skittering after their host. “If they kill all the symbiotes, then the host will become much easier to kill.”
Dahlia frowned. Was that true? Svara seemed to think this was important, so maybe Dahlia could help her become certain.


They watched as the beast slowed to let the symbiotes clamber up its sides and disappear under its crest. It ambled along for several long seconds before turning back towards the battle. Dahlia was so focused that she didn’t realize she was holding her breath as it charged back into the fray.


Once again, shadows rocketed out from under the crest: one, two into the enemy, and a third towards a hunter. Dahlia smirked when he avoided the pest and clove it in two. Again the host bellowed over its loss, and seemed to limp a little as it retreated.


Pride swelled in her chest. If the monster knew what was good for it, it would focus on the clan’s enemies and then return to its home. It wasn’t fit to prey on her fellow hunters.


“Three, yes?” Svara asked. “Well, two now.”


“Aye,” Dahlia nodded. “They weren’t as fat, though.”


Trent clapped his hands in epiphany. “They feed each other!”


“Huh?” The others all looked at him.


“The host shelters and transports the fleas,” Trent explained. Dahlia hadn’t noticed the resemblance before, but immediately accepted the idea that the symbiotes could be called ‘fleas.’ “They hunt by leaping into prey who avoid the host’s charge, suck its blood, and then deposit it back into the host. Something of that size could store the blood for extremely long periods, and the symbiotes could withdraw through the same portals they deposit…”


“‘Kay,” Dahlia interrupted. “What good that do us?”


Trent shrugged. “I suppose it doesn’t do us any good. I’m confident Svara’s right though, two fleas remain.”


“Thank you, Trent,” Svara said. Dahlia was certain she heard resolution in her tone. “And I think your theory helps more than you expect.”


How? Dahlia hesitated to ask the question aloud. If Trent was right, then killing the fleas would eventually cause the host to starve. It could still trample and gore with its horn, though, and Dahlia doubted the hunters would tolerate its attempts while they waited.


She surveyed the battle again, straining to find the clue she was missing.


The human enemy was an entire squad of people who moved like Svara - only better.  They had seemed so formidable when they first arrived. Now they were being trampled like flowers under a stampede. The monster was killing its share, certainly, but the bulk were dead by club, blade, and arrow. Dahlia had shared her matron’s confidence, but she never would have believed these Breathers would lose so decisively.


Shouldn’t she be able to predict that sort of thing? The others had pretended they did. Svara seemed to know how the beast would die. Even Trent showed signs he understood something about the outcome that she didn’t. Was this insight the final piece she lacked, the void she needed to fill before she could hunt with the others?


By the time the host circled back for another pass, only four Breathers still stood. The remaining fleas targeted hunters, but both of them died when their pounces missed. The host began to thrash, and its path became erratic - eventually pointing it towards the camp.


How would the matron stop it from trampling the weaker members of their family? Would Kirana, Nuray, or Evan stand about divining the future with whatever math that Svara and Trent were using, or was it more about action and control?


Without an answer, she grabbed Cascata’s discarded axe began to stride forward. It took several seconds to realize she wasn’t alone; Svara matched her pace and direction.


“We were told ta stay, ya know.” Dahlia said.


“That we were.” Svara’s face was difficult to read.


“Ya got a plan?”


“More or less.”


Dahlia smirked and bolted forward. Svara was quicker and she knew it, so the head start seemed fair. “Betcha mine works first!”

-CUT-

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Wednesday, July 8, 2015

Chapter 10: Erosion

I kinda like this one, at this moment. I kinda like the whole thing at the moment ^_^

I was recently told my narrative felt disjointed (I'm paraphrasing). I gotta find a way to work on that while keeping the ultra-short format. At least, that's probably what I need to do? We'll see.

Series starts here, episode starts here, and chapter starts here or down there.

Chapter 10: Erosion

This was infuriating. The girl’s family had managed to delay Guarang’s unit for a few meager moments, and now it seemed the elements themselves had conspired to keep him from his glory. Coincidence after coincidence had prolonged her fate; her Breathing pedigree, the indifference of Southern peasants, the Dawnless Woods serving as her ironic sanctuary. Now this abomination appeared at this precise moment, when they’d cornered her among these savages. Why had this routine task become such a trial? Was the Destroyer testing him?  


Guarang supposed it didn’t matter. This monster, the primitive warriors standing in his way, and especially the impudent woman who lead them: he’d take great pleasure in releasing his frustration on them.


In what order, though? The monster’s arrival had complicated things. If it really wasn’t one of theirs, would it be prudent to let it live a little longer? If it attacked his soldiers, could they defeat it and the savages at the same time?


Guarang knew these thoughts weren’t like him. This was the vanguard’s approach, not an assassin’s. He was out of patience and out of time, so he supposed this was an auspicious change of attitude.


“Visheta!” He called.


“Captain.” Her voice wasn’t far off.


“Come to me.” Once she was close enough, he lowered his voice. “I need you to gather the hostage-takers. We need everyone, and we can’t be weighed down by their weak. I don’t know who this monster finds more appetizing, and I want to be ready if it decides to attack us.”


“Sir,” she acknowledged before bounding away.


The moon was bright, but the bonfire was brighter. His eyes were trying to adjust to it, and that made it more difficult to see his enemy. Luckily, he was a Breather, and the wind told him she’d stopped when the monster appeared.


“Give us the girl, and we’ll leave you be,” Guarang offered. “You stood little enough chance against us. We both know you can’t fight both us and this monster.”


“Beasties don’t come ta us lookin’ fer food, stranger,” the savage replied. “They know better. This’n’s here for you people. Don’t much care if ya believe me, you’ll know it’s true soon enough.”


Guarang regretted every chance he’d given his enemies. “Erode the savages!”


The soldiers were quick to obey. The tactic was a loose engagement, to bait the enemy out of formation and dispatch them one-by-one, much like how the wind wore away at mountains. The attackers seemed to outnumber the defenders, so Guarang hoped this wouldn’t take long.


The savages seemed to be prepared for this approach. They lashed at the Breathers when they drew close enough, but didn’t pursue when they retreated. Guarang realized the girl could have- no, he was certain she betrayed their secrets. If he had any doubts about her treachery, they were gone now.


The monster made its sound again - like an enormous horse nickering - and for the first time, Guarang caught a glimpse of it. It had four legs like tree trunks, thick and flat-bottomed. Its hide glinted like armor, and its neck was shielded by an enormous, bony crest. The head seemed small compared to its oblong body, but a wicked horn, front edge as sharp as his scimitar, jutted out of its snout.


It barreled towards Guarang’s soldiers, apparently seeing an opportunity in their attack. It shouldn’t matter. It would grow tired of chasing such nimble prey…


Its momentum built faster than Guarang anticipated, and one of his soldiers failed to run in time. He tried to cry out, but was silenced under one immense footfall.


The sight was almost enough to distract him from the nearer beast. Unlike her composed comrades, the savage woman charged towards him. Did she believe she could win the night by challenging the captain?


Guarang had other priorities. “Nabhi!”


The warrior leapt from behind him to intercept his attacker. She halted as Nabhi’s blade nicked her shoulder. It seemed he’d caught her full attention.


“You’re satisfied?” Guarang was surprised and relieved that Nabhi had been so compliant. He’d never wanted this insubordinate glory-monger in his squad. Nabhi didn’t have the normal soldier’s discipline, hadn’t even been born into the caste. He fought for some perverse sense of valor, not because it was his duty. If Nabhi weren’t so potent, he’d have been executed long ago. Tonight, that seemed to be working to Guarang’s advantage.


“Quite,” Nabhi replied. “So long as you don’t interfere.”


“My attention’s needed elsewhere,” Guarang assured. “Consider yourself lucky.”


“Ya might not wanna send ‘im away,” the savage taunted. “Ya may find ya need ‘is help.”


“Come, we don’t need to insult each other,” Nabhi answered. “Consider it a compliment I chose you, despite the fact you have no weapon. That’s how highly I appraise you.”


“Aye?” The woman’s hand wandered to her waist and fumbled around her belt. Guarang scoffed; had she really forgotten her weapon? “Ya got more sense than I woulda guessed. Sorry, stranger, I done ya wrong.”


“Forgiven. Just don’t disappoint me.”


Before Guarang departed, he noticed the savage glancing towards her camp. He almost felt sympathy for her. When faced with an inevitable loss, there was bound to be guilt. Should a soldier be fighting the opponent in front of them, or one of those engaged with a comrade? It was the way of the warrior, to assume their choices could make the difference between victory and defeat. The assumption was necessary, but faulty. Soldiers only did as commanded, and the better commander would win the day.


Nabhi lunged forward, and Guarang sprinted away from the doomed woman. With the monster in play, the battle had two fronts, and he was needed where those lines met. The Breathers were versed in human anatomy, but they would need his analytical mind to find the beast’s weaknesses.


There was blood on the wind; Guarang hoped it belonged to his enemies. Breather units didn’t often suffer casualties, but fate had forced them to behave like other, more reckless soldiers. He should assume there would be heavy losses, should be ready to accept his superiors’ wrath if they decided the cost was too high.


The beast was circling back as Guarang reached his comrades. It chose its angle well, opting to stride along the battle line rather than break through it. If it had a brain worth its size, it would rampage through the savage’s side; they’d be much slower to move out of the way.


Before he could finish his thought, the beast charged straight towards him. Monstrous as it was, he supposed it was still a stupid beast.


“Bodhi, are you here?” Guarang called.


“Yes, captain!” His lieutenant sounded distracted.


“Maintain command here, and be ready to assume full control if something happens to me.”


“Yes, captain!”


Guarang rushed to meet the beast’s charge. He didn’t know if he could bring it down by himself, but he was confident he could devise a strategy, or perhaps encourage it to attack his enemies.


Why was it even here? From its size and shape, he’d have guessed it was a grazing beast. Why would a grazer attack without provocation? If that meant it was a predator, how could it eat the prey it trampled? One stomp and all of its meat would be reduced to a puddle of bloody mud.


Were all the beasts in those cursed woods so nonsensical?


The creature lowered its head and brandished its horn at Guarang, but a quick leap to his left and he was clear of danger. Such a clumsy enemy was a poor match for Breathers; it would never catch one without surprising them…


Something plowed into his side, knocking him off his feet. As the shock faded, Guarang wondered how he’d been forced to the ground. The ribs on his right side were broken, making it difficult to breathe. The pain was paralyzing, but he managed to roll onto his back.


Something was perched over him. The sight of it made his skin crawl, and he made a futile attempt to slide out from under it. It pinned him with its stumpy forelegs and stared at him with compound eyes. Before he could scream, a needled proboscis shot out from its head and into Guarang’s chest.


His final scream was a sigh; he felt the needle between his ribs, piercing his heart. The suction began, and Guarang watched in horror as the creature’s abdomen began to swell with his blood. How could this have happened? Why couldn’t the girl just accept her penance, why had she brought him to this awful place? Who had allowed this place to become so awful? Most importantly, why had the Destroyer forsaken this loyal servant?


As he died, he wondered when he’d surrendered all control over his life. Why had he been so convinced this was someone else’s fault?

With a flash of light, Guarang suffered no more.
-CUT-

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